Friday, May 22, 2020

Improving Style Through Syntax, Part 12: Placing Verbs

Here is a rhetorical legend you should disregard: Do not begin a sentence with a verb. I have no idea where this stuff comes from, but you can begin a sentence with anything that you, and especially your readers, understandand appreciate stylistically. 

You should not have a problem with beginning sentences with verbs. In fact, you were taught to do just that in the third grade when writing imperative sentences like these:
  • Call me tomorrow.
  • Display your photo ID.
  • Send your check to the address below. 
Now I can hear the grammar cops saying, well, the you is understood in imperative sentences, so you're really beginning those sentences not with a verb but with the pronoun you.

Don't be ridiculous.

To avoid beginning a sentence with a verb (as I've done in this sentence with the infinitive to avoid), the grammar cops will tell us to precede a verb phrase with a prepositional phrase, as in: In order to ensure a secure workplace, we request that you display your photo ID. But conciseness requires us to eliminate those first two words: To ensure a secure workplace, we request that you display your photo ID.