Here’s a quote from the you’ve-got-to-laugh-at-this-one files. Before Senator Hillary Clinton suspended her presidential campaign, this is how she responded to a question about challenging the seating of maverick delegates from Michigan and Florida in the Democratic primary: “Well, we are going to look at that and make a determination at some point. But I haven’t made any decision at this time” (New York Times, June 2, 2008, page A1).
A more concise statement would have been “We will decide, but not now.”—from 24 words to 6 words. But such is the stuff of politics.
Notes on effective writing at work, school, and home by Philip Vassallo, Ed.D.
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