PHIL VASSALLO

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is a communication and education consultant. He is the author of three writing guidebooks (HOW TO WRITE FAST UNDER PRESSURE, THE ART OF ON-THE-JOB WRITING, and THE ART OF E-MAIL WRITING), a play collection (QUESTIONS ASKED OF DYING DREAMS), two essay collections (PERSON TO PERSON and THE INWARDNESS OF THE OUTWARD GAZE), and two poetry collections (LIKE THE DAY I WAS BORN and AMERICAN HAIKU). He holds a doctorate in Educational Theory and Philosophy from Rutgers University. He may be reached at Phil@PhilVassallo.com.

Monday, August 29, 2011

Arbitrary Grammar Rules: Breaking Them

Sure, rules of sentence structure exist. But if all writers follow them slavishly, we would not have sentence fragments like these in well-known books and essays:
  • My birthday a year ago when he had twenty-five nights left to live. (Joan Didion, from The Year of Magical Thinking)
  • To return to the convoy about to depart. (Viktor E. Frankl, translated by Ilse Lasch, from Man's Search for Meaning
  • But for what purpose? (Martin Luther King, Jr., from Letter from a Birmingham City Jail)
  • Semitic? Semiotic? Jews and the science of signs? (Walker Percy, from "Why Are You a Catholic?" in Signposts in a Strange Land)
The point? Know the rules first and break them sparingly for dramatic effect.